Research & Planning 11/20 (D) Construction: 39/60 (C)
Your magazine demonstrates a clear understanding of conventions, and makes some excellent use of font, colour, layout, and image.
Targets: • Embed your questionnaire onto the blog. • The draft layouts are not viewable. • Consider adding some coverlines above the masthead. • Place the date under the masthead on the right hand side. • Add page numbers to the contents page and double page spread. • Consider using images from a different photo shoot for the contents page. • You need to add more to the contents page, consider making your font smaller and including more text. You may also expect to see an image of the front cover and/or a subscription offer. • Use columns for the text of your main article. You may want to remove the images from the first page of the article to make room for the columns – the picture of the dog is delightful, but unconventional so you may want to remove it. • Consider adding a pull-quote to the second page of the double page spread.
You currently have 63% overall which is a C grade. You need to ensure you complete the suggested improvements as this will help you to improve to a B grade overall.
Research & Planning 11/20 (D)
ReplyDeleteConstruction: 39/60 (C)
Your magazine demonstrates a clear understanding of conventions, and makes some excellent use of font, colour, layout, and image.
Targets:
• Embed your questionnaire onto the blog.
• The draft layouts are not viewable.
• Consider adding some coverlines above the masthead.
• Place the date under the masthead on the right hand side.
• Add page numbers to the contents page and double page spread.
• Consider using images from a different photo shoot for the contents page.
• You need to add more to the contents page, consider making your font smaller and including more text. You may also expect to see an image of the front cover and/or a subscription offer.
• Use columns for the text of your main article. You may want to remove the images from the first page of the article to make room for the columns – the picture of the dog is delightful, but unconventional so you may want to remove it.
• Consider adding a pull-quote to the second page of the double page spread.
You currently have 63% overall which is a C grade. You need to ensure you complete the suggested improvements as this will help you to improve to a B grade overall.